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Post by Ballcoth on Jun 25, 2006 21:04:39 GMT
Yep it's your turn mate...How did you like the poem?
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Post by Siph on Jun 25, 2006 23:04:53 GMT
Well, I was reading it at work, and my co-worker (who is so tired of me talking about the story) was next to me, and I think all he heard me say was: "Omg, he (you) is so cool!" So, I like it
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Post by Siph on Jun 26, 2006 1:55:43 GMT
Sooo tired now... I've created a "double post" just to seperate the two story lines. Well, here's my notes/ideas: - The 3 merry elfs are only around on Siph mission to find Dunadain and the 5th orb part. Some of them can be killed in their search. Any survivors won't follow Siph on her further journey after she gets the orb. - Emerane? Can the weapon skilled poet join our group? Not sure yet... But I think we should keep him alive, so someone can tell the story through poetry - Dunadain... Don't think he is alive anymore. But I'm not sure of this either. If he is, he is so corupted by now, that he can't be left alive. Maybe Siph has to kill him?! - Regarding weapons. Well, Siph got a bow now. I thought that the merry elfs might have some swords she could have. - This orb fragment is very powerful. It almost totally consumes Dunadain in just a couple of days/weeks (who knows how long time he was out?). My thoughts is that this might be the "core" of the orb, and the other fragments we are collecting is only the "outer parts". And just some final notes... This piece (pieces) was not like anything I've expected. I must admit that my mind sometimes works in mysterious ways. A few days ago I've "planned" completely other events, but I think I got inspired by Ballcoth's pieces to go in this direction. Because of the great power of this "core piece" I thougth that Siph needed a full party. So sorry that I all of a sudden introduces so many new chars. Oh, and at last: I hope you enjoyed the last piece of mine as much as I enjoyed writing it.
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Post by Siph on Jun 26, 2006 1:58:15 GMT
Oh and regarding the fighting scene on the pinnacle I have to thank my co-worker who is also playing wow. He actually acted that scenario out in game. He was fighting alot of centaurs on that pinnacle and big accident aggroed more. And he then jumped down into the water to save himself. I thought it was such a great scene that I simply had to write it into our story
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Post by Siph on Jun 26, 2006 2:00:09 GMT
Lol, I can't stop posting... But if you haven't figured it out here's the classes of the elfs:
Umehim : priest Elusit : druid Ignamar : rogue
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Post by Ballcoth on Jun 26, 2006 11:46:06 GMT
I enjoyed this piece very much Martin. You made the right call in finding her a party, as I said from now on the fights Must become tougher. Dunadain's story is very well written, he clearly explains why he had to go to Tanaris. The fact his newly formed teamtes are Elves make that promisse and the waiting very comprehensible. You haven't saied anything about Dementhia or Ironforge so I guess I'll have to figure that out by myself. I'll try continuing the story with both teams, but i'll focus a bit more in our old, since your last post focused more in Siph, Hope you don't mind. Overhall, and as usual I had a great time reading your piece.
PS: When they jumped out of the bridge, I was expecting them to land on a Horde guy who was just passing by on his Windrider...LOL, but the water thing was a very skilled trick to use, it shows Dunadain's tallent.
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Post by Ballcoth on Jun 26, 2006 11:47:49 GMT
One more thing, I'll try writting more today but I can't promisse anything.
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Post by Siph on Jun 26, 2006 11:50:37 GMT
Phew... was a bit afraid you didn't like it
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Post by Ballcoth on Jun 26, 2006 11:55:58 GMT
Na, don't be I liked it...But I do think you can do a lot better!
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Post by Siph on Jun 26, 2006 12:01:06 GMT
I will sharpen my old elven pen and write an epic battle soon, I can feel it! Hopefully I won't be ganked by my wise and strong battle cat that's running crazy around my appartment. And I hope I won't be as tired the next time I'll start writing as I was last night. May the gods help you succeed in your writings, good man!
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Post by Ballcoth on Jun 26, 2006 18:47:03 GMT
Next Issue is on Hope you enjoy it PS: As I said I focused a bit more in our old team, hope you don't mind.
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Post by Ballcoth on Jun 26, 2006 19:57:39 GMT
I changed Dementhia's role a bit too, I just hope you fon't go mad at me ;D
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Post by Siph on Jun 26, 2006 20:56:14 GMT
Good idea with the sister part. . the camp is named Camp Mojache though.. the one you use is the one in Barrens which is in the wrong direction.
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Post by Ballcoth on Jun 26, 2006 21:25:49 GMT
OMG I'll change it, I'm sorry. What's your Overall opinion on the the issue?
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Post by Siph on Jun 26, 2006 23:10:22 GMT
It was good, but got lost somewhere in it, because you changed to Siph and I didn't realize that before I read some more lines... but else it was good
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